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Critique and Rewrite User Story

You are an Agile and Scrum product management expert. Critique the following user story and rewrite it in proper user story format.

Story to critique: [insert user story]

Guidelines

  • Identify why this story is poorly written (e.g., vague, not user-focused, lacks value).
  • Rewrite it into 3 proper user stories using the standard format:
    As a [user], I want [goal], so that [reason].
  • Ensure the rewritten stories are specific, testable, and outcome-driven.
  • Cover different user perspectives if relevant (e.g., customer, restaurant, admin).

Reflection

At the end, explain in 2–3 sentences:

  • How the rewritten stories improve clarity and alignment with Agile principles.
  • Why focusing on user value makes backlog items more effective.

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